Today, Dave Etter, “Marcus Millsap: School Day Afternoon.”
And here is what one current Homestead junior had to say in response to the poem:
And here is what one current Homestead junior had to say in response to the poem:
In Dave Etter’s “Marcus Millsap: School Day Afternoon,” the narrator’s
colloquial description of his afternoon showcases the meandering thoughts and
gleeful appreciation of a child. As the
narrator bounces in the back of a yellow school bus, he decides to make himself
a “sugar sandwich” and then look at “the birds/ and the gigantic blue silo” as
soon as he gets home. The narrator’s love for sugary snacks and bird watching
captures the essence of the child’s mind, focusing on the literal meaning of
the words to create a laundry list of what he’s going to do in the afternoon.
However, his attention quickly diverted as he goes on a tangent about how his
family is going to the farm show but that “farming’s no fun,” and he’d much rather “do something big” like
“grow orange trees in a green house” or “drive a school bus and yell at the
kids.” The narrator’s quick shift in focus is similar to that of a rambling
child, never quite fleshing out a full thought and yet touching on a variety of
subjects. Also, his perception of “big” things is skewed to reflect what is
true in his world, a world where growing orange trees and driving buses are the
noblest occupations in the world. When the narrator goes home, he grabs his
sugar sandwich—a “brown sugar” sandwich, he notes—and then lies in the grass
and thinks, “Imagine, a blue silo to stare at,/ and Mother not coming home till
dark!” The narrator’s attention to unnecessary details like his brown sugar
sandwich, his rapt attention for the blue silo, and his delight when he
realizes his mother won’t be home until dark highlight the pleasure that can
only be found in everyday life by the mind of a child. The narration of “Marcus
Millsap: School Day Afternoon” successfully evokes the feelings of enchantment
and the oddly detail-oriented thoughts of a child.

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